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Reviews For: Heard Her Voice

Astarayl
2006-03-20
ch 1,
abuseI loved this. "Why'd you go and do that?"- the attitude is great.. I love the indignation. The feelings are readable enough that there is still an element of suspense up until the end. For such a short work, this was very well written. Good work.
a lonely september
2006-02-25
ch 1,
abusethis is so . . . different. the way it is. i would have never thought of anything like that and have been able to write it down in a way that has it prettier than poetry. it's so different. it leaves me feeling incomplete, not knowing what's next, but that's part of the mystery of this.
La Gitane
2006-01-08
ch 1,
abusePrecious! The first paragraph, which had in all honesty seemed a little pointless, ties in very pertinently with the end.

And I would totally not mind having a relationship finish on me if it was for this reason. The uniqueness of it would be brilliant!
ayadora
2005-12-31
ch 1,
abusethat's an interesting thought. The mystery is gone...once he heard her voice.
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