Amen...

This is your answer, you have composed it so. Do you realise it, yet. Consider what reviews I have written and some of the things you have composed and look through the lens of this posting you have wrought and through it you will wrought from these pages a blazing light.

Honestly, I only understood the first and last haikus. The 2nd & 3rd weren't making a whole lot of sense to me. But maybe that's b/c I'm not religious. Keep writing! :)

While I don't dabble in religious poetry much, this is nice. It seems very much like a prayer in the formatting, and the language is appropriate. Nice work. Keep writing! :)

Chapter one could totally be a song. Great job.

Amen! Beautifully written. I enjoyed both post very much. Keep up the wonderful work. Thanks for the review.

hey, I feel the same way! are you a christian?