hey krystal... well just wanted to let you know as all ways i love your poem and you should put the rest in.

*stabbed *begged *because *cause *can't *don't *u, ect, ect. i'm just stating that those weren't exactly ... great spelling but that's okay. you probably wanted it that way, maybe it's your style, whatever. i'm not so fond of it, but it's your choice, i mean i dont use proper punciation, so i guess you have a right to do whatever you want with your writing. anyway. not that that vent is done, i'm going to comment on the actual poem. it was good & i liked it. it was full of emotion. keep writing.