I love poems like this. Where the whole poem is a metaphor(sp.) and you have to read between the lines. I read your profile. you sound fun. you dont meet to many fun people like myself on this website...they're usually just quiet little people.

Thanks for the review I should have another urban legend that will be much shorter up today or tomorrow..

this is good... it puts different thoughts in my head.. i dont like the "mystery pretty" rhyme but besides that I like the feeling...

PS... thanks for the review... I dont have a lot of time write now... i will read one of your stories some rainy day

I don't know why this poem made me smile, but it did. But I'm a weird anyway.

I really, really like this poem, though. I especially like the last few lines and the image I get of you stuck in a giant spider's web. But even though the poem can be read in a very literal way and taken for what it directly says, I see symbolism in this, whether that was intentional or not.

holy shit this is awsome!! its dark, really dark, but in an very cool way. hope you write more like these.

ps: i updated the twisted chronicles. check them out.

This poem is insidiously gorgeous. I love the dictional ambiguity and the dew drop format. gorgeous

So it's like you're born hot but in the same since the moment you born you start to die. So you looks and life are fading prematurely...god I need to stop drinking. I guess the words 'sticky little ropes' filled my head with the dirty.

I can see how many could relate to this. But for most people this would seem rather jaded as not everyone thinks that highly of themselves to imagine their beauty fading. And to think of all the work they must to do keep up that reperesentation of themselves through the eyes of others. Pretty good message in such few words. ...needs more words. My reviews are so pointless