I like it a lot!Reminds me of what the last day on earth is suppose to be like

I really love this because of how you only see him after all the pain and suffering in this world. Sweet and light-hearted, for the ending. Good job.

wow there are so many new poems, I should come more often to your site. this poems is really beautiful. It's not only romantic it shows also, what most of the people feel. So many things happens around them but all they see is the nearest. Love it, also some of the rhymes are not as good as they could be. Here's not enough space, so I'll write you.

It's really nice, especially the end. It's so sweet and romantic. I really like the end: "Yet all I see is you."

woww, it's really really really good, no joke. it sounds like the genocide happening and all you're thinking of is this person...i like.

aww it's cute, it's cute! hehehehe...makes much sense it do.

i like the theme you have going here. But, (yes..i know. the ever-dreaded 'but' in the review..i'm so sorry and please forgive me, but I'm trying to help) I feel that it seemed you were forcing the poem to rhyme. Some poems are better off with a scattered rhyme, or no rhyme at all...Please R&R some of my poems =)~secret poet~

not what i was expecting at the outset, so that made ne smile, it flows really well and te end is sweet.