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| violet blossom 2008-06-06 ch 2,  | abuseOh. My. God. This is so good! I don't normally read one-shots but the summary of this story just captured my attention. And I like this very much. The story is short and sweet. I like September. She's so random and lovable! Is there any chance that this story will be a chaptered one? Not just a one-shot? I really want to read more about Brian, the were-bat (howcome you come out with that term anyway?) and September! |
| missmuffet 2008-04-19 ch 2, anon. | abusefab! by the way, what happened to jc jaquez? |
| Pen'NInk 2007-12-07 ch 2, | abuseI normally do very serious critiques of what I read here on However, your story is an unusual one which requires me to change my tactics. THIS IS ADORABLE. IT MADE ME COO AND GIGGLE. OH-EM-GEE. YOU'RE THE BEST. |
| luv me like no other 2007-05-27 ch 2, | abuseWhere's Darren's story? And what will happen to the couple? |
| Lady Katreina 2007-04-02 ch 2, | abuseWoot! |
| OctoberAvenue 2007-03-19 ch 2, | abuseThis is such a cute story!! I loved it, which is quite unusually because I don't read supernatural or humor. You totally came out with the funny in this story. I even laughed out loud! Two thumbs for this story!! |
| The Aquatic Chewbacca 2007-01-15 ch 2, | abuseawesome. just...hilarious. seriously, i was laughing so hard. my poor sister must of thought i was crazy xD. i'll be keeping an eye out for Darren's story! |
| betalight 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseOh, hiarious. And yes, its all for the college essay...I have to write mine now too. |
| Another Lone Stranger 2006-12-12 ch 2, | abusethis was a good one-shot. me likey :) |
| Isabella22 2006-10-30 ch 2, | abuseOh my gosh, this story is awesome! GREAT JOB! Really good! |
| E.B. Keane-Farrell 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abusethis is good so far...I like the characters. September is well-developed. |
| toxic-noodle725 2006-09-10 ch 2, anon. | abusedude this story is hilarious! i couldnt stop laughin! i loved it. the end was really cute. i think u should write a sequel bout september's story on her unique relationship. it'd be funny. great job! |
| daydreambeliever01 2006-09-04 ch 2, | abuseHa. That was Awesome! I LOVE the way you write. Anyway... I'm at tech and really must get home else I'd write a longer review... |
| The Green Crow 2006-08-30 ch 2, | abuseOMG that was so good!lol! Keep imagining. Keep creating. Keep writing. Amina L. |
| The Green Crow 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Wow, I'm enjoying this ALOT!! |