lmfao. t'was awesumm! and pretty hilarious xD

Interesting, were-bat never saw that coming. Did you read The Secrets Of The Famous Immortal Nicholas Flamel? They also have sth like that in there.

hahaha! Awesome and funny!

I love your writing. Once you start reading, you can't stop! : )

werebat seems extremely gay but i like everything else

Pretty good story :)
It was really funny I enjoyed it

I adore this story!Its hilarious!!and way too cute!!

This story was so funny! I loved it! I laughed so hard I couldn't breathe!

Oh. My. God. This is so good! I don't normally read one-shots but the summary of this story just captured my attention. And I like this very much. The story is short and sweet. I like September. She's so random and lovable! Is there any chance that this story will be a chaptered one? Not just a one-shot? I really want to read more about Brian, the were-bat (howcome you come out with that term anyway?) and September!

fab!

by the way, what happened to jc jaquez?

I normally do very serious critiques of what I read here on However, your story is an unusual one which requires me to change my tactics.

THIS IS ADORABLE.
IT MADE ME COO AND GIGGLE.
OH-EM-GEE. YOU'RE THE BEST.

Where's Darren's story? And what will happen to the couple?

Woot!

This is such a cute story!! I loved it, which is quite unusually because I don't read supernatural or humor. You totally came out with the funny in this story. I even laughed out loud! Two thumbs for this story!!

awesome. just...hilarious. seriously, i was laughing so hard. my poor sister must of thought i was crazy xD.
i'll be keeping an eye out for Darren's story!