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| Decollage 2005-12-08 ch 1,  | abuseThe broken lines help to set the mood- I love the visual imagry also. It helps that all of this is true. Propoganda, media... is it really so different anymore? The message came through with startling clairity, and your style helped it along. |
| gpshaw 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abuseHave to agree with you there, the Media has such POWER too, I mean if the media reported on WWII (30,0 US deaths.) like Iraq we would have lost. ANd thats jsut recently, you'd think these 24 hour news channels would cover all their bases but nope... |
| Naibz 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abusenice piece. you do realize that this is a form of media do you not? media is just a way for an indavidual to express creativity. and through this their opinions are placed as well. just as you have done here. but if you just apply the message in this piece to the indaviduals that dont see this and do nothing but soak in anothers creativity and opinions they lose all sense of themselves and become drones. good piece. keep writing. |