|Reviews for As Fate Watches|
| breezy nostrils 12/5/05 . chapter 1
I liked how you personified Fate. It really added to the poem. Nice work!
| FunkyFlower 12/5/05 . chapter 1
beautiful imagery in this. it's an amazing poem, great job!
| a lonely september 12/4/05 . chapter 1
"ice colored eyes" "clouds in the coffee" so many beautiful details in here. i liked it a lot. keep writing.
| Bronzeage 12/4/05 . chapter 1
Very good imagery and rythmn