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   breezy nostrils 12/5/05 . chapter 1I liked how you personified Fate. It really added to the poem. Nice work! |
| FunkyFlower 12/5/05 . chapter 1 beautiful imagery in this. it's an amazing poem, great job! mez |
| a lonely september 12/4/05 . chapter 1 "ice colored eyes" "clouds in the coffee" so many beautiful details in here. i liked it a lot. keep writing. |
| Bronzeage 12/4/05 . chapter 1 Very good imagery and rythmn |
