ive always thought the no sex before marraige thing is stupid. but thats ok. good poem. not ur best but good.

interesting

Great work.

Nice, but it's kinda hard for me to grasp ever thinking God wouldn't forgive someone for extra-marrital sex...

So real with many heartfelt emotions protrayed in this. Lovely work.

Wishdreamer

Very haunting, quite brilliant.

i was too lazy to log in ,i thought it was good.

wow. I like it. Awesome. Great job as usual.