like the other reviewer, i like the metaphor a lot..this one is even better on second reading. i love you!

Again, your imagery and emotion is so powerful. You have this way of writing that just kind of grabs me. I love it. Keep it up.

Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig

I'm not the best at giving compliments but I really liked this and I certainly have no criticism for it.

an interesting analogy; i especially love the last three lines. nice work.

Deep and somehow, touching, how you depend on that someone so much as to believe so much in him/her. I like how you used pits and holes as the bad times in life. Good job.

Trinity