Very very awesome stuff! ^_^! I really like your lines. -hug-

Slightly over-dramatic, but a nice concept, altogether. I'm a great fan of Frankenstein- and at least you appreciate the REAL value of that book.

THe end where Jenny and Agnus sound too unreal. At first it was ok, but the end of their arguement and Jenny's last line was a bit fake and too rehearsed... kinda like it had been written in some old 1700's play. I like how the girls find the book with the marked page. Overall, I liked it. Good job. Keep writing. Hope I was helpful.

Wow. No offense, but I don't like it. It's not K+. Up it a rating...or two. It's much too disturbing.