perfect!

the last two lines, for me anyway, made the poem!

beautiful and sweet, but not cloying, clearly told and evocative, the rhyme and rhythm are subtle and enhance the poignant inherent sadness of the piece, none of us can dictate what is good and what is not, though we can say, " I like the writing." And I do.

Beautiful poem! I always love snow, so you most definately hit the spot with the first few lines. Wonderfully done.

So sweet. I love the imagery and the purity feel.

Very cool and poignant. This is really cool and elegant. The flow sounds musical and graceful. Good job!

beautifully written.

i know it doesnt have to do as much with snow, but i cant help wonder how i will react to through major personification and metaphors we all change the messagenothing can be taken away to pull away about how delicate and beautiful it is?

Beneath a shower of light so cold,-delightful

This is creepy. It's so sweet and innocent i just can't help but htink that soemthing terrible would happen but it never did. :(

Anyway, It had a good flow and nice rhyme.

Beautiful imagery! My favorite line was "Beneath a shower of light so cold" Keep writing.

wishes without tears...

sighs

beautiful imagery, and the last verse is great!-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

wow this is great good job keep it up!

Beautiful.

You capture the fragility and gentleness of snoflakes so beautifully.

Lovely ending.

; )

Beautiful imagery as always...

Wow, this is an awesome poem, love it!