|Reviews for Fantasy|
| King Krod von Bopper 12/15/05 . chapter 1
the last two lines, for me anyway, made the poem!
| dooley creel 12/11/05 . chapter 1
beautiful and sweet, but not cloying, clearly told and evocative, the rhyme and rhythm are subtle and enhance the poignant inherent sadness of the piece, none of us can dictate what is good and what is not, though we can say, " I like the writing." And I do.
| Calliope Foster 12/10/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem! I always love snow, so you most definately hit the spot with the first few lines. Wonderfully done.
| White Tea and Ginger 12/9/05 . chapter 1
So sweet. I love the imagery and the purity feel.
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 12/7/05 . chapter 1
Very cool and poignant. This is really cool and elegant. The flow sounds musical and graceful. Good job!
| sloppy firsts 12/7/05 . chapter 1
| Aquafied 12/6/05 . chapter 1
i know it doesnt have to do as much with snow, but i cant help wonder how i will react to through major personification and metaphors we all change the messagenothing can be taken away to pull away about how delicate and beautiful it is?
Beneath a shower of light so cold,-delightful
| Sally-andersonn 12/5/05 . chapter 1
This is creepy. It's so sweet and innocent i just can't help but htink that soemthing terrible would happen but it never did. :(
Anyway, It had a good flow and nice rhyme.
| Aruchu-chan 12/5/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful imagery! My favorite line was "Beneath a shower of light so cold" Keep writing.
| naughtgreen 12/5/05 . chapter 1
wishes without tears...
| KwazyKandyPie 12/5/05 . chapter 1
beautiful imagery, and the last verse is great!-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| Jodie Sinclair 12/5/05 . chapter 1
wow this is great good job keep it up!
| Plinky 12/5/05 . chapter 1
You capture the fragility and gentleness of snoflakes so beautifully.
| Kat-Renee Kittel 12/5/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful imagery as always...
| Hidden Lies 12/4/05 . chapter 1
Wow, this is an awesome poem, love it!