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| backseats on thursdays 2006-01-19 ch 1,  | abusenew horizons... definitely a leaves one with a moment of floating thought. beautiful descriptions. |
| curiouzkatt 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abusecool... only a few words, yet so much... |
| SSSSS 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseNice one; especially like the stanza qith the spider. Tschau,Sam |
| straightfromtheheart16 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abusei love the imagery... the spider webs and persephone |
| tepid sponge bath 2005-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really, really, really like your work. Seriously. I've read all of it (haven't finished Wednesday yet, though), and, I love the way you use your words. You don't use many of them in your poems, but that doesn't stop them from leaving intense impressions.I am honored to have been reviewed by a writer such as yourself. (forgive the girl who has been reading James Clavel's Shogun) |
| whatsapenname 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseoh, persephoneoh, sacrificeoh, things i do not know and everything else i think youre wonderful ~whatsa~ |
| Extraho-Uxor 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseLaid out like a map and beautifully read. I love the allusions to mythology, I truly think they add to the overall mysterious subject of the poem. It made me think, as all great poetry should. |
| Charl33t 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI love the ambiguity of this piece. "Star- laced cobwebs"... what gorgeous description. |
| Phoenix7 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseHeh. Truth. Good works of literature are like that - a dozen interpretations. They do say that once something is written, the author has no say over what it really means any more... it's, well, it's all perspective, as you said :) My own poetry lacks in that, I think - I tend to just write straight description, which leaves no room for imagination or interpretation. As for my perpective on this - there's the message on literature, and laced into it, a vivid image of a snow-swept moorland, frozen heather and cobwebs; and an allusion to the cycle of nature - Persephone, hot blood, rebirth. An impressive work. Top stuff. |
| jackharrup 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abusePerspective faxcinates me, it's so unique. And you detailed this wonderfully, excellent work. |
| Not Quite Dry Eyed 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abusethe line "Star- laced cobwebs of what never could." was what really stood out to me...this is a very complex poem (i read it twice before reviewing)...i still don't know the message in it...or if it has a message...but i do know this is a great poem...great job with it...keep writng forever and always...please R&R me some time... Twisted Harmony |
| Smoky Bear 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abusewow! i liked the images conjured by the title, and then the poem itself blew me away, it's really simple and vivd. it was hard to choose a favorite bit but i really liked "Settled in a mire of relativityclarity lost to massesclarity gained to the lone." - enormous weight of truth. |