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| Dannie 2006-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow... Beautiful poem, loved it! |
| cmar 2005-12-04 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice, and very sweet! We all envy the innocence of young children, and you've captured that feeling very well. |
| Jitterrue 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abuselovely use of poetic repetition and vivid childhood imagery. great poem |