Stunning and twisted. Your words are very enigmatic and appetizing. The ending was wowing.

Intriguing, quite unusual, and the reader wonders what exactly it isabout, it could even refer to the circle of the person's life and his/her wish to escape through suicide. Interesting poem.

"Bluntly said, enough" and yet not blunt and not simple and hopelessly tangled up in the little nonsense that makes humans humans. she wants out, but she doesn't say it-she's caught up and it takes omniscience to see her plight. the above is my interpretation. take it or leave it. your poems are often breathlessly short, always stunning, and also... vague. imagery left in the way of the reader for her to pick up and put together. just an observation... made me think.

exceptional.

Unready

i like this beautiful job

"EXIT looks seductive"

It always does.

delicously done.

reminds me of going on those spinny things at old, very old in fact, elementary schools.

until you just cant see the sky or ground, or anything in jump off just to see where you will land life

I have no words.

perfection.

* noelle

nice job. i don't really have much to say about this one, except that i like it. no complaints. : )

This is really good, awesomeness. Great work.

I love this. This is really great. You are now on my favorites list.