 Ahemait 2006-02-03 . chapter 1hi! i havent talked to you in a while, and you havent written anything recently either. you have some grammar mistakes, but i'll just point out these two, because i've been told that correcting grammar mistakes is bad. "To many masks
Covering to many faces" both the 'to's' in there should be 'too'/ good poem, i really liked it. WRITE MORE! |