ok i love pantoums so im a big fan of the way this sounds. but i also didnt get the line "Grand classicals and semis" probably because i dont know what semis is... other than that tho, very nice :)

Hi, and thanks for the review! Allow me to return the favor...

Hm... I can't say I particularily like the style, so that's probably clouding my judgement of this poem. I guess I'm just not very patient with redundancy! The one thing i really didn't understand was the phrase "Grand classicals and semis". Seriously, just flew right over my head (twice!).

Let me go read a different poem with a different style so I can give you a better review. :) One sec! --Ruatha