 The One Who Shalln't Update 2005-12-15 . chapter 4This was great! Confusion DOES start things...I wonder if I should add confusion to The Temple. Wouldn't that be SWELL!?
Anywho, I'll have the next portrait up tomorrow, but I'll give you a hint: it has something to do with PIE.
That's right, PIE. My favorite food in the world XD
THANK YOU for reading AND reviewing my story!
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 Limited Edition 2005-12-05 . chapter 4I think you should rather continue this story. It's a pity leaving there, because you had the characters, and you had a plotline, why not make it a story? That's what you're here for anyway right? You could rather weave this message into the story; I often try to do that. If you do it well, everyone will get your point automatically (which I doubt people do with my stories XD) I'd love to see what happens afterwards, the open ending almost didn't fit, because it was simply too unexpected to be a nice twist. It's too good for this! *spanks* write now, write! |