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The One Who Shalln't Update 2005-12-15 . chapter 4
This was great! Confusion DOES start things...I wonder if I should add confusion to The Temple. Wouldn't that be SWELL!?

Anywho, I'll have the next portrait up tomorrow, but I'll give you a hint: it has something to do with PIE.

That's right, PIE. My favorite food in the world XD

THANK YOU for reading AND reviewing my story!

Ja ne!
account not in use 2005-12-06 . chapter 4
i really like it,actaully. for some reason, I'm thinking they used Daryl's name randomly?
Limited Edition 2005-12-05 . chapter 4
I think you should rather continue this story. It's a pity leaving there, because you had the characters, and you had a plotline, why not make it a story? That's what you're here for anyway right? You could rather weave this message into the story; I often try to do that. If you do it well, everyone will get your point automatically (which I doubt people do with my stories XD) I'd love to see what happens afterwards, the open ending almost didn't fit, because it was simply too unexpected to be a nice twist. It's too good for this! *spanks* write now, write!
Limited Edition 2005-12-05 . chapter 3
Aww *cries*
Limited Edition 2005-12-05 . chapter 2
It's getting better and better~ So high-school like XD I'm thankful the schools here aren't like the ones in the US XD (Those things in the movies actually happen? @__@ I wont believe it XD)LOL at this: "“Wait…” Steve said, sitting up. “Why’d you call me a **?!”" WAHAHAHAHA XD He realizes it like 5 minutes afterwards XD so slow! Tom is so in love with Daryl *believes every guy on earth is at least bi*
Limited Edition 2005-12-05 . chapter 1
LOL wahahaha mr.placebo?! XD is this slash or am i reading it in vain? T_T
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