ah! lol that was odd
haha

Oh my God that made me laugh for some reason! At the same time it has a dark and morbid sense to it that I am totally in love with. Short and simple!

On an editing point did you mean wary instead of weary during the line that says, "I know I should be weary?"

Just a thought!

Great Job!

-Black Rose

O...creepy! *Makes a note to keep her window closed*

Ridiculously simple, but pleasing nonetheless. The repetition gets almost overly redundant...but you can leave it if you want.

dang. The ending totally shocked me!