|Reviews for Thoughts|
| elasticbobaturtle 12/4/05 . chapter 1
Ooh, very nice. It felt like a fast-paced poem -there was a nice rush to it. You might want to add a little punctuation on some parts (questions marks)...but perhaps you left them out purposely, for an artistic effect. I don't know; I'm not poetry expert. ;_; Eheh, you can just ignore me.