I see it's almost been a year since you've updated. I really like your story so far and REALLY can't wait for what happens. Please post something soon.

pretty good. I'm excited to see what happens!

I like the story so far, but am curious to know the ending. Do you plan on finishing? (I'm just asking, not trying to be snide or rude.)

OK this is your writers block relief, motivation style.
This story has to be the most unique one I have come across on this site, and you've developed it beautifully. I'm not usually a fan of Sci-fi type Fantasy works but you have me irrevocably hooked. Your plot and character developement have detectably improved since the beginning of this piece and that is encouraging. Keep up the excellent work- you are obviously a very talented and creative writer. I can tell you this with a certain authority because though I do not publish any items on this site, I am a writer myself so take this as the epitome of thumbs up and 'a slap on the back'... so to speak. Update soon (...meaning now...) because you have a great gift and should not waste it.


CHERRY^_^

Don't lose your inspiration on this story; it's a great read, and one I look forward to reading fully through.

Really, don't stop. Never stop :)

Eep! I'm so sorry that I've been gone so long! School has been crazy and... well... I met this nice boy and... uh... ANYWAY! Excellent chapters! Trish is doing crazy things now and it's really cool. Let's just hope nobody has any problems with her because of them. She seems a LOT more comfortable around Matthew now anyway. You have a lot of characters now though. *dizzy* It's hard to remember who was who again. I probably just haven't read it enough. I'm sorry again. I'll try to keep up in the future. Onwards to Ziana!

okay that was weird...

Keep going! sorry I haven't been reviewing but I have been OS busy you woldn't beleive. I am really loving the cute romace... it is the best part of the story!

peter needs to help the earthlings get back to earth!

Awesome! This just keeps getting better and better! More Pleaze!

I'm really enjoying this story, keep updating!

Meow. Yep. I really liked this chapter, actually. When she was sending that little boy on... that was well done. woot-ness! And hey, I actually have a chapter done myself, I just need to go through it a couple more times and fix it up! :D Anyway... yeah. And stuff.

LOVE IT! How could anyone not? I have to hand it to you, the descriptions used in this chapter are impecable!

hm...well that was interesting I wonder what it is. I guess i'll just have to wait for the next chapter. Please update as soon and you can

I love the story.