   Jenner84 2009-09-12 . chapter 1I beg of you to update this! I loved this story so much the first time I read it, and it actually inspired me quite a bit! So please, finish Kyie'o & Deak's story! I'd love to know the deets of how they met, what their life is like, etc. Awesome. |
 KCcutepup 2009-07-05 . chapter 3GRR! I REALLY like this story so far and i am S"OO mad that you stopped writing this and also because i can't find anything else like it! NO! Please continue writing! |
 Kidiu Anaji 2009-05-08 . chapter 3Woah, this is crazy! I mean, man! Aw, MAN! And it's ben abandoned! Now I'll never know what happened! I hope you might continue this! It was getting so exciting! |
 Kinsey 2009-04-18 . chapter 3 I'm really loving this story. It's so unique! I'm really bummed that I'll probably never find out how it ends, given the last update was years ago. |
 StoicCrying 2009-01-14 . chapter 3I...This is probably one of the most unique stories I EVER read. Very interesting, I really hope you continue it! |
 kiki19857 2008-12-21 . chapter 3update? |
| Tp lazy to sign in... 2007-08-17 . chapter 3 Please, please, please update this! I found this a few months ago and read it over, and over, and over and only just realized I'd never reviewed.
This is really great and I REALLY want to read the next chapter! I hope you haven't abandoned it ^_^; |
| Aleks 2007-05-10 . chapter 1 Will you ever update this story or is it dead? (I hope not) |
| applecinnamon 2006-12-19 . chapter 3 Where's the rest?! I'm actually CURIOUS about the gay alien sex now! EVILNESS!! |
| Rainy 2006-10-05 . chapter 3 Haha awesome... I agree with Lee Var! I'm over here! Come impreganate me wiff alium babehs! |
 beloved18 2006-10-05 . chapter 3lol i luvthe story |
 krlsen 2006-08-22 . chapter 3Please give me more*puppydog eyes* |
 Ally Lei 2006-06-29 . chapter 3Please Update! I just found this story while searching on fictionpress because I was bored, and let me just say I am definetly(sp?) not bored now. Ohmygod! This is such a great story! Please continue or at least show us when Kyie'o(sp?)...claims Deak or however you want to refer to it. Please! |
 Owl-of-Artemis 2006-03-23 . chapter 3omg lol- i freaked in joy when i saw you had new things up, then i read this whatever it is and im like...o.o; yet as weird as it is- you are still a freakin genius! :D update soon! |
| RaiL 2006-03-15 . chapter 1 Ooh! I just reread Chapter 1 here and saw the difference in dialogue from the AFF one! I truly do hope you continue this soon, it's such a promising story and definitely one of my favourites. ^^ |
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