please tell me there is a sequel?...!

do you have a website perchance?

The ending with the aquatic creatures business seemed a bit rushed, to me, but I simply adore the rest. The beginning positively rocked. Salem is a fun character and Naaki is really cute.

I do wish you had expanded the ending a bit, but other than that? Great story that I really enjoyed reading :)

this one to i love~i love such a romantic and lovely story~~*melting in a pool of loveliness*

Funny and cute! I liked it :D

~Teodora

Cute. Blunt in an amusing way, and a refreshing character style...And yay for breaking cliches - sorta! (how many people on the 'halfblooded' side kno they are half blooded until too late? yea, exactly...nice job) Random indeed, but very worth the read! ;)

you sure like mythological creatures. But this is nice.

I truly &heart; this story!

you have found a new devoted reader in me. i cannot fathom how you come up with this stuff! :sigh: if only i had the imagination. but i don't. just for other stuffs...

anyways. wonderful fic, adorable to the very end. ^^ now i'm off to pick something else to read, and then something else, and then something else. all on one list...omg it's your profile page! who'da thunk that so many choices existed in one place?

(go ahead and shoot me now, i'm rambling)

Great story, you should do a part two or another story like it.

That was so cute and adorable. Had me smiling througout. Such a great read ^_^

Lol, a very hilarious and cute story! I love how Salem ended up knowing all along... so adorable!

*lol* I liked it and it was very cute for a one shot ^^

*giggles like crazy* Super cute. Random and short, and not as coherent as one might like... But come on, it's a one-shot. Who am I to complain? *shrugs* Great job!