Interesting. Good job.

metaphorical interpretations on this are limitless. we should interpret it in english class, 11 o' license is a wonderful thing, and who says choc-o-late anyway?

Even though you speak of something as simple as hot chocolate, I can sense a sadness in this. It's quite good really.

EB

Love it.

interesting... i like this

i liked this. i suck ass when it comes to haikus/short little poems so i found this realy good. & i agree with it, too, so that's always a .

I don't like how the haiku's one sentence split intwo three lines... but it's a cute haiku. Just thinking about the hot chocolate and milk warms me. :)