Hi, Loriency! Thanks for giving me a review. I hope to hear from you again, though. :) I checked your profile and found this poem interesting...

I like the way it sounds in my ears: it's purely coincidence that you're always everywhere but here. Very, very nice! In a way, it doesn't make sense, but it does. It really does!

Now I can't stop thinking about that line... :'(

Send that to a ex-bf

It's sad how you can't forget a loved one unless you go to that particular place in your head. Quite a well done piece, though it wasn't quite outstanding though. Anyways, I love this very much, especially your lines.

When I hear your sneeze

Atop a mountain.

those two lines were cool. my favorites, I think. nice job with this poem- there is really a lot of emotion in it and it is beautiful.

wow, like the one before me said, it is really a strong poem. I think there are millions of people on earth who have the same feeling you wrote about. But if your belief is strong, I think he's always with you.

Very nice ending to it...I think you overall stayed strong with this one but the ending really brought it through...nice job! Oh yeah..and around ann arbor..that area