As I was reading your poem, it really sounded like you were saying it aloud. To me, it didn't seem like a typical poem, but it was entertaining and funny. I should add, however, that what you wrote in this poem would probably sound better if you wrote it in a story format.

5 letter word. F-U-N-N-Y

Wow we.that was great ^^

hahahahaha excellent piece. its hell funny!

hahahah that's great i like it!