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Reviews For: My Melody

mizu no kokoro
2006-02-15
ch 1,
abusevery nicely written~ had good flow~

keep writing!
natasha
2006-02-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseHay- that was beautiful! I absolutely loved it! Great work- keep it up!
silentscreamer07
2005-12-17
ch 1,
abuse*gasp* wow, hayley, i really don't know wat to say, this was absolutely beautiful. You def. have an awesome talent at writing, so def. keep it up. I hope you post tons and tons of more poems soon! cuz lemme tell you, this was really really great. I loved the lines: "I whisper secrets to the stars/and still go on believing" AH! I LOVED IT! *kw* this was...just...WOW! *kw* cya soon! buhbyes

~george

btw...this is def. goin on my fav. list :D
LoveAlways05
2005-12-13
ch 1,
abuseWOW Hayley! this was so cute. Keep up the Writing!
FunkyFlower17
2005-12-07
ch 1,
abuseabsolutely beautiful! this is a frigging awesome poem! love the flow and the rhyme. great job, keep it up,

~mez~
Random-Idiocity
2005-12-07
ch 1,
abuseThis was...just Woah! I am speachless I dunna what to say, you are very good at writting, Keep it Up!
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