I like this... the whole downard spiral is greatly illustrated

I was trying to desparately review yesterday on this piece. I think this is one of your best pieces...I'd like to suggest*a new format or structure* I think something different with the formating can really pronounce some of those one of a kind lines...-Christine

I love how you start this out with “once upon a time;” it’s such an innocent saying; like people in the beginning of our lives we really are innocent. We begin like stories; and I guess all of us really do end with “the end.”

I like the theme of being judged; always being judged. Like now matter how you put yourself out there or what you do someone always bashes your for it (for whatever reason: the hurt or to help) I always feel useless when someone tares down something that I’ve done- like why the hell am I doing this? I guess life is about learning to do things for ourselves and not others. Wonderful piece.

Juliet.