hey, sup? this is such a cute little story. Keep writing with it, it's great ^_^ Update soon!

-Phoenix

Err... I was thinking that 'hearing' could mean you just hear what someone's saying, but don't really understand it, or follow the directions you'd been given. And listening was the opposite. >> Kinda hard to explain I guess.

Anywho, I loved this! Poor Fang though, with all those marriages that turned out bad!

~Kchan

Ok, this is what I think it means:

The whole time Fang was trying to listen to her heart but she really didn't hear it because she didn't know what she wanted.

What's what I see. I think this story is brilliant Nina-chan; I'd conisder it an allegory: a story read on two levels. Depending on who reads it you can acheieve many levels of symbolism in this.

Nicely done lil sis. ^_^

Chobi

i love the title! very cute! keep writing :)

So cute! Adorable story Nina-chan. Keep it up.

Just wanted to note to the reviewer, Sally: she can very well use purple hair if she wants to. Purple hair does not make someone punk.

Anywho, Nina-chan! I liked this mostly because it has a Chinese legend in it, and I luff those kinds of things! ^^ Eh, I noticed the Usagi thing too! I wish I knew how to say 'rabbit' in chinese to help you out. >_> Ah well. Cute and lovely legends and stuff! Great job!

~kchan

I didn't like the purple hair. It's not a punk story.

Make the beginning of the story a little more clearer, like who exactly the character is because I was a little ocnfused.

The calling out to the girl even though there were lots of peope in the line seemed alittle awkward.

The ending was just wierd and fable-ish. THen at the end I was confused aobut who Usagi was again.