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Reviews For: Advertising a Chair

Nobody-n-Particular
2006-07-13
ch 1,
ah, quite beautiful.
Noir Fleurir
2006-05-10
ch 1,
this one's good too i like the last stanza thing
in theory
2006-03-19
ch 1,
Interesting, that last stanza really add something intangible. Nice job.
beti213
2005-12-07
ch 1,
"brought from motions of stripping sensuality clean" *faints* that is absolutely gorgeous and simple and powerful. bravo!this whole poem seems to have clean lines but at the same time it's brimming with emotion and sensation... brilliant.
Faithless Juliet
2005-12-06
ch 1,
I loved the emotion that you put into this; very intense and imaginative; it was like I could feel every word.

Juliet.
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