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| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-13 ch 1, | ah, quite beautiful. |
| Noir Fleurir 2006-05-10 ch 1, | this one's good too i like the last stanza thing |
| in theory 2006-03-19 ch 1, | Interesting, that last stanza really add something intangible. Nice job. |
| beti213 2005-12-07 ch 1, | "brought from motions of stripping sensuality clean" *faints* that is absolutely gorgeous and simple and powerful. bravo!this whole poem seems to have clean lines but at the same time it's brimming with emotion and sensation... brilliant. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-12-06 ch 1, | I loved the emotion that you put into this; very intense and imaginative; it was like I could feel every word. Juliet. |