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| britt 2006-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abusethis one is cute. made me laugh :) |
| Nothing Profound 2006-02-06 ch 1,  | abuseFunny. I like it. |
| XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was really freakin cute..I like it alot. So insightful. Great joB! |
| squiggle-line 2005-12-14 ch 1, | abusemathesaurus...^_^ I like the contrast between the imagery and the mathematical equations in the first two paragraphs. But I agree with you, sometimes numbers (or Greek symbols) don't convey things words can... And the oposite is also true. |
| dooley creel 2005-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abusemath does have a beauty, it is just not an overly warm, it is clean, prescise and pure, though a tad aloof, poetry can be evocative and nuanced in its ambiguity, it can also be dumb, vauge dishonest and equivocating in its pretense.When I read your review on Texas and I came to the end of the first paragraph you wrote, (idiots) and even though, from a literary point of view this might be considered rather blunt humor, nonetheless, I burst out laughing, and even afterwards, evertime I glanced up at the word I smiled, you can tell how sophisticated my tastes are. Your comments about the food were perceptive. One of the people I was visiting in Kerrville originally came from east Texas and was from a family of Cajun descent, hence the okra, I did ask, well what kind of beef do Texans eat, I was told, ' The whole cow.' And as for the fire ants, I was actually locked in mortal combat with them for an entire night in a remote cabin, but that is a long story, it ended with a most beautiful pre-dawn walk however, so those ninja assassin fire ants proved to be quite the incentive for poetic cogitation. DC |