Beautiful, simple and gently written from the heart. Just like the other person, it took me a few times to read (slowly) and understand. It's one of those poems that no matter how slow you do read. That there is something almost wave like in the rhythm.

Initially- I was sceptical about this- It seemed pointless. But I read it about 20 time and suddenly it had a meaning and I was dumbfounded as to why I couldn't see it before. It's peacefully twisted and I adore it. "The rain dances" Amazing- It's almost as if you have used Onomaetopheia- can't spell sorry! It has really amazing personification and elegance- I really love it...Love and Hugs, Autumn x (Plinky's Best mate)

Woah, this was really good...Keep it Up!

Wonderful imagery, and there is so much room for the reader to interpret. Impressive poem.

Wow! That's really nice. I loved it.

Beautiful. You manage to incorporate so many different things into the poem and somehow they all fit! You have *Counts* Doorways, the sea, stars, sleep/dreams, and rain. And somehow they all fit together beautifully.

Gorgeous poem. Lovely mood to it.

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