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| Wolfgirl1987 2006-10-22 ch 1,  | abuseBeauitful. Tis the song and story of my heart and desire, |
| Andreea Chandler 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseAw, that is so sweet! :) I love how you incorporate the characters' surroundings with their feelings, it's brilliant. Keep up the good work. |
| NaiRomajin 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI like it, but it really feels broken up with the seemingly random poetry.Maybe if the prose was a bit more integrated with the poetry, it would seem more unified.Hehehe, I can tell this was a very daring piece for you to write. More powa to ya! |
| CircleStream 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very good. You know how hard it is to read a story just like this? I don't think I ever read a story that involves love, romance, and God...all in the same story. ;) It was very sweet, although it was a little...um...maybe a little cheesy, with just the overpowering emotions involved, plus the italics...well, yeah...it was a little much. But still, very sweet--thanks for the read. :-D ~CircleStream |