|Reviews for More Than an Illusion|
| CRaZy-OdIN 8/14/06 . chapter 1
you gave me the image of something like a rag doll all torn and freyed falling, past best attempts to stay up, and being picked up and mended all stiched up and new again. I really liked this poem, very hopeful and honest. x
| Moondog Dozier 12/28/05 . chapter 1
Very well presented images. This flows extremly well. You use your theme well and stray well away from cliched speech. Good write.
| sunday night sky 12/12/05 . chapter 1
i love this :) the rhyming is great and i relate to it. nice work :D
| Aquafied 12/7/05 . chapter 1
seems so happy in the its like a bullet to the violent and good.
| SayIt'sWrong 12/7/05 . chapter 1
I love the last two lines. This is such a beautiful and heartfelt piece. Well done and thanks for your review! QueenVixta
| Arichos 12/7/05 . chapter 1
I love the ryhming, you've done well. Great work
| gothmiko 12/7/05 . chapter 1
AW how sweet.I really like it.