you gave me the image of something like a rag doll all torn and freyed falling, past best attempts to stay up, and being picked up and mended all stiched up and new again. I really liked this poem, very hopeful and honest. x

Very well presented images. This flows extremly well. You use your theme well and stray well away from cliched speech. Good write.

i love this :) the rhyming is great and i relate to it. nice work :D

seems so happy in the its like a bullet to the violent and good.

I love the last two lines. This is such a beautiful and heartfelt piece. Well done and thanks for your review! QueenVixta

I love the ryhming, you've done well. Great work

AW how sweet.I really like it.