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Lavender L. C
2005-12-07 . chapter 1
Great work, this was very well written. It's pretty deep too! Keep up the great work!
Morcirith
2005-12-07 . chapter 1
unique form, but i think you need some lessons in grammer and keeping peoples' interest.
Voice of a Pen
2005-12-07 . chapter 1
Confusing and angry different but nice i dont know what else to say just kind out angry and foil
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