Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: I You

Lavender L. C
2005-12-07
ch 1,
abuseGreat work, this was very well written. It's pretty deep too! Keep up the great work!
Morcirith
2005-12-07
ch 1,
abuseunique form, but i think you need some lessons in grammer and keeping peoples' interest.
Voice of a Pen
2005-12-07
ch 1,
abuseConfusing and angry different but nice i dont know what else to say just kind out angry and foil
Return to Top