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| Lavender L. C 2005-12-07 ch 1,  | abuseGreat work, this was very well written. It's pretty deep too! Keep up the great work! |
| Morcirith 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abuseunique form, but i think you need some lessons in grammer and keeping peoples' interest. |
| Voice of a Pen 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abuseConfusing and angry different but nice i dont know what else to say just kind out angry and foil |