OMG Kittie! It's been forever. I see alot of changes to this since it's original form. It's still great as ever =]If you ever get on AIM or YIM, lemme know =]KRISTEN

WOW.This is such a cool series.

A little typical, with the "creepy house in the woods", the clifhanger, ending, and the girl who wants to escape. Your prose is pretty good though, except that you seemin the habit of switching to a minor character's POV (mom, the boss)as the end of each scene. While artistic, doing this too much detracts from the flow of the story. I am going to presume that the story is set it Japan, cause it's manga?...but you do not specify this and the home description sounds American to me.