faith hill in my head now. fantastic emotion in this.

I love that last line! "i'll wear your goodbye like bad tobacco" Wow that was just awesome. Kudos

shavo (formerly know as paintnakedbodies)

Absolutely beautiful. My favorite line?

"Trying to get by/With mascara tears, black-rimmed blue eyes..."

A broken soul smothered in such a beautiful facade. Amazing poem.

-Sunami Silverblade

There's somehow something very sinister and darkened deep down, beneath the surface in this. I don't know... there just is this uneasy feeling.

this is gorgeous. i can really imagine it happening; sounds kinda like me actually. very nice.