 sarah1491 2006-10-07 . chapter 1Short but very nicely written. It is really amazing. :)
-Sarah |
 Moondog Dozier 2005-12-11 . chapter 1Runs well, in that it stops and starts when it seems like it would just flow straight through. Amazing that it still hits hard without specific images. |
 the walking wounded 2005-12-09 . chapter 1this was awesome! I like the use of short lines...it makes it seem profound... and thanks for the review! |
 Smoky Bear 2005-12-07 . chapter 1cool... stick it in politics, lol. ambiguity is a wonderful thing. well done with the short, strong lines. |