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| Moondog Dozier 2006-02-22 ch 1,  | abuseAgain, very well detailed in such a short work. "And the words written across her eyelashes," is a very telling phrase. Deep and powerful. Well done. |
| katt's got your tongue 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseexcellent adjective and word choice. great imagery. |
| Ajna 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful... just beautiful. Very well done, I love the format and the wording. I'm just speechless, wonderful! |