I like north. He's cool. I want to give him a hug. I don't like Xin's other voice though, sounds too much like a perverted old man.

let me just say, once again, for the hundredth time i'm sure, your writing is on par with the best novels i've read and your character development is on par or better than them.

so anyway, i love how this chapter turned out, I wish that i knew someone as awesome as north. Selflessness is hard to find. But it'll be really interesting to see what has become of him in FDSD. :)

^_^ i enjoy reading your story. it makes me wonder what Xin real home must be. And his double personality scares me but for what it could do cause North haven't fone anthing to hurt him. and to say that the story is great that i check to see for updates! please update soon!

Wow. The prequal is awesome! I fianlly get to find out (at least kinda) What happned to Xin. These three stories I'm reading are extreamly good! Can't wait for more! Wow, this simply has to be the shortest review I've given you so far.

Hey there! So Xin has a split personality thingy, eh? Interesting. I guess it`s based on the need of self-protection in order to not go mad with the circumstances he lived under.
I wonder what the voice in bold meant when it said "if he turns out to be lying, I get to have fun with him". of course I have a foggy idea (who wouldn`t) but still... and of course you got me curious about Xin`s home and why he can`t go back YET. I mean, shouldn`t he want to NEVER go back if it was so horrible? Argh - lot`s of questions and no answers... I guess I`ll have to wait for the next update, hm? *sigh*
well, then update soon! :D

Good chapter! I'm glad North took it as good as he did when Xin practically threw himself at him!;) I don't like Xin's bold thoughts/voice or whatever I'm gonna call them...;) It seems evil...;)

Wow. Poor Xin. north is going to be so confused! lol. It's great.

When you updated this story yesterday I figured that since it's a prequel to FDSD I should read it! And I'm glad I did, because it's really, really good!;) I like both Xin and North!;) Update soon, I want to know what happens!;)

*squeal* keep writing! i likes.

o what a tturnaround? did Xin get the wrong idea or what? North has his work cut out for him, i think. I can't wait to read the next chatper. and for the record, i know i'm insane ;)

Ha, good thing I review then, if it reminds you to go on writing. ^_^ I`m glad you did update.
I had to grin when North thought "Whatever has gotten into me, I wish it would leave." - still can`t stop actually :D
I feel sorry for Xin (which is really no surprise). To think that noone ever did anything for him just because. sad. And I might come across as dumb, but is Xin doing what I think he does? After hearing that his attempts to help North with school or the house are dimissed he tries to compensate him with sex? I hope North can teach him that not everbody wants to only use him...
anyway: I can`t wait for the next update! I`m looking forward to it, since you left us poor readers at a CLIFFIE! (T_T)
Oh, and thanks for the info about FDSD. I don`t think I`m going to read it just yet though. But I`ll keep it in mind. You`ll know when I did by my review! ;D

Great story so far... I like Xin, he seems interesting and loveable despite his obvious issues... I also love North's parents XD His mom seriously made me laugh twice hehehe. And North himself ... rebellious on the outside, well-adjusted on the inside, lol, he's sweet.

Xin and North's reactions to each other seem a little unrealistic at times. I'd suggest letting their actions speak for themselves, as lines like "All I want is for you to be unafraid. The bright glow in his eyes is clouded now. All I want is for you to trust me. Can’t I just say that?" seem hasty for two people who have just met.

I'm really intrigued by the plot line and I can't wait to read more! ^^

Hey there! You got a great style of writing. It`s captivating and draws you into the story and the POV you`re usng. I like the main characters (North and Xin) already and I`m awfully curious about Xin`s past - what`s that about a hospital? and of course the future: is he going to stay at North`s place? I hope you update soon - can`t wait! :D

IT was good. I love this insight into Xin's past. I'm glad you decided to write it. You must really like writing about him. The only problem with this chapter is you wrote except instead of accept. But everyone does that lol. Anyways. Can't wait for more.

Your stories have so much depth. when i read i feel like i'm in the head of every character and can relate with them totally. (even when in reality, i can't relate with most of them lol)