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| Silver Magiccraft 2005-12-08 ch 1,  | abuseI like it. I think I got the messege...I hope I did, but it is late and I don't expect much of myself at this hour...I noticed one typo at the end. Last line: On this Mistletoe Holiday or the year. I think you meant of instead of or...But maybe you didn't? I just wanted to point it out just in case. I'm having a hard time typing and I wish fp would be updated at well at ff. Sayonara ~~Silv~~ |
| Pink Sparrow 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good. Love the way its written, its different to other christmas poems and that I love. Nice job! |