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| Wingless Cherub 2005-12-20 ch 1,  | abuseI'm absolutely speechless, breathless, totally amazed. In one way I'm glad you didn't give this a summary because what hooked me was the content. What wonderful content it is! I love this so much I don't even have words powerful enough to describe. I like that this poem goes along with Pope's deal--such an original idea I haven't seen on this site until now. Terrific, ridden in angst (my favorite). My favorite line is "(it's not your fault) and yet it is"--most favorite line ever. Ever. This is... like I said, my words just aren't powerful enough to convey my thoughts. Terrific! |
| Smoky Bear 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuselovely.. the indentation (?) of lines really slow the poem down, so it makes for interesting rhythm changes. love the way you've entwined lines and ideas from Pope's poem into your own piece. inspired. |