Thank you for the great review Werewolfnighteyes.I really liked this poem. It remindes me of something that happened in my life. Its awsome!

Didn't i review this one before? I'm sure i had...

Anyway, this is a sad piece of work. No, not insulting you, just saying your poem had that sad feeling to it. Bleagh, it sounds like i'm insulting eh? Lol, whatever. Anyway, isn't the first part a bit too dramatic to fit in with the rest?

I like the writing. But the idea is still sorta vague to me. Im not sure I know exactly what you're talking about.. Unless you meant for us to wonder.. either that.. or im just dense!Lol.. N e ways, I like the line "Words are sharper than knives". Very accurate I must say. I also like the flow of the poem.. Great effort! Keep it up! Sorry i didn't get what you were talking about. I tried! O.o

--Much love, Meme