oh oh okay, hah i understand. i was a little confused, so hah thanks for explaining :)

-naomi

ps: i hope anyone who reads that poem knows that i purposefully wrote 'time' instead of 'thyme'.. i was just thinking about that, its been bugging me hah

oh, hah thats very cute, i like. (excuse me for the lack of a good review, ive never been good at writing reviews.. ever. but i like the poem :) )

-naomi

ps: which part of the poem was the reference to simon and garfunkle? because ive never listened to them in my life... well except maybe once or twice a few years ago with my dad, but yea..

This has a wonderful individualness that is relatable. The humor and the reality of it really capture what we care about in others. Excellent work.

Love is everything in the world that I don't understand, and so much more.

I love the message, the layout, the delivery.

Great writing! ^_^

That is the oddness of love.

I like this one! Especially the first line. Such a creative piece. =^.^=

i like t his piece a lot, it made me smile, and think too, i'm not really sure what exactly it's supposed to mean, clearly it's about someone i don't know, but it's really well done, i'm babbling aren't i? well thank you for sharing this, and thank you for the review

Aw, so sweet. Makes me smile and think at the same time. Very sweet!

Pretty interesting...keep writting.

wow =]

i got swept away. this is so...truthful. deep. meaningful.

its wonderful.

I like this. The last line was fantastic.

huh? i like it...but its...odd...but in a way...amazing...not sure

Made me smile. =D Maranwe

I like this poem, that treats something simple with a great imagery.

The first three...eh, stanzas, I think are spontaneous. The third, makes me think.

Brilliant, once again.