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| faking closure 2006-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh oh okay, hah i understand. i was a little confused, so hah thanks for explaining :) -naomi ps: i hope anyone who reads that poem knows that i purposefully wrote 'time' instead of 'thyme'.. i was just thinking about that, its been bugging me hah |
| faking closure 2006-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseoh, hah thats very cute, i like. (excuse me for the lack of a good review, ive never been good at writing reviews.. ever. but i like the poem :) ) -naomi ps: which part of the poem was the reference to simon and garfunkle? because ive never listened to them in my life... well except maybe once or twice a few years ago with my dad, but yea.. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThis has a wonderful individualness that is relatable. The humor and the reality of it really capture what we care about in others. Excellent work. |
| drblueface 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseLove is everything in the world that I don't understand, and so much more. I love the message, the layout, the delivery. Great writing! ^_^ |
| I.O.K.O 2006-08-03 ch 1, | abuseThat is the oddness of love. |
| Magical Rainflier 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseI like this one! Especially the first line. Such a creative piece. =^.^= |
| dustytiger 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abusei like t his piece a lot, it made me smile, and think too, i'm not really sure what exactly it's supposed to mean, clearly it's about someone i don't know, but it's really well done, i'm babbling aren't i? well thank you for sharing this, and thank you for the review |
| Love in the Roses 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseAw, so sweet. Makes me smile and think at the same time. Very sweet! |
| How-Big-Is-Your-Violin 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abusePretty interesting...keep writting. |
| sauntering through life 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abusewow =] i got swept away. this is so...truthful. deep. meaningful. its wonderful. |
| sleeping Pisces 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseI like this. The last line was fantastic. |
| BrokenandBeautiful 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abusehuh? i like it...but its...odd...but in a way...amazing...not sure |
| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseMade me smile. =D Maranwe |
| Lounalune 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem, that treats something simple with a great imagery. |
| lostfish 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseThe first three...eh, stanzas, I think are spontaneous. The third, makes me think. Brilliant, once again. |