Hmm... I think I understood it. I think... Anyway, it sounds like you were misunderstood about something. I thought the rhythm was great! Keep up the good work!

Makes me wonder what exactly happened. Very good.

Gorgeous. I love the lucid and lyrical quality of the poem, but you also personified some very human emotions. Great!

very good. i liked this. the beginning was effective. i liked it. the whole 'tick-tock' thing was good, too. i know im pathetic at reviews, but im just hear to say how i like it. ; )

Confusing (in a sense), yet really good.