wow...this was very touching, i bet you read that like 100 times already. i like how the girl is all tough, and not broken and resignated. congrats, this is beautiful :)

Wow, really interesting. I would never have the guts to do that kind of thing, and I really don't know who to feel bad for Caitlin, or Brody.
Really well written, as usual.

Wow.

Aww this was sad, but yet very intersting. I wish he didn't have such a horrible ending.
But, like umm I'm just wondering how old is she?

It's amazing how wrong you can be about somebody just because you never give them a second chance. It doesn't excuse what he did, but this was really good.

wow... this is so touching... you have written it in a way that would make an imprint on somebody's mind and heart for quite a long time... i hope that you do get published... ^_^ and if you do, i'll make sure to buy a copy of your novel... please continue on writing and not give up... kudos! ^_^

Well it's 3:35 and I'm still reading and you're definitely going on my favoirte author;s list. What can I say...I'm at a loss for words, because this is really sad, really sad, and really good. In your other writings, I was near to tears, but in this one, I really did cry. You're a great writer, keep it up.

Lacy

God Bless

Holy crap. That was... definitely more than good. Amazing. And even that doesn't do it justice.

ohmygoodness.

Wow. Just wow.

~dancingintheshadows