Damn. That sucks. The situation, not the story, don't worry. Written very well, I liked the last sentence a lot. :D

aw that was really sad :[...you know, you write some depressing stuff :[ but nice job :] ur really talented:]

that is so good! please update! x

Man, this was...wow. You know, I just wanted to say, you really inspire me. Yes, you. I read your profile and was astonished at your determination to become a writer, even though your parents didn't want you to. My parents don't want me to either, but i'm glad that even though they don't want me to, I will stop at nothing to acheive this goal of mine. And you really inspired me, with your style of writing and all. I just wanted to say a brief thanks to my new role model. Great story.

~Godchild

This was really good. Really really good. I love the lines:

"Amy doesn’t have a religion. Or if she does, it’s Amy-ism."

That made me laugh. This was really sad though. Knowing that no matter what you say your friend is going to end an innocent babies life. It just seems selfish. Then again, some people might argue that it would be selfish not too. You can't make people's minds up for them though. Great job. (I'm just wondering, do you have a religion or is it just the character in this story that does?)

I really liked the way you ended this, really really liked it. It all just feels so real and that is what makes a good writer. Keep up the amazing work!

You have the most amazing one shots I have ever read. Great job!

"Since we were both in the mood to be loud, Amy and I rolled the windows down and belted out a rousing rendition of the birthday song." Haha, yeah, I'm like that with my friends. Really emotional piece, really realistic, too. I don't agree with abortion AT ALL so I can really relate to Amy. The one line that really hit me was "I couldn’t stop thinking that there were three people in the car instead of just two, and one of them will never be sung happy birthday to." That's so poignant... so painful... wow, this story nearly had me in tears. For a baby that isn't real! And the part about Amy not crying for it but Callie... wow. This feel so REAL. And the ending line... well, this is fantastic, and I wish it had been longer. I wonder what happened... anyway, stunnig work, never stop writing. You're really good.

great eneding paragraph. a very emotional, powerful stroy. succesfully shows both sides, and I like how Callie didn't push her opinion, and saw that what she said wouldn't do much. It's very realistic.