really good! i wish there was more =(

great story!! =D

:) I like this. Not much else to say except that I hope they make it to california this time :)

Oh my goodness, please tell me there's more. Bravo, once again.

Yay! Happy ending!
So unrealistic, but hell, I love it!

I know I said I hated Shawn, but my heart goes out to the little doofus. But what he did was still rather sick.

This story gives me goosebumps. I absolutely love how you tie all these things in together. Serious talent.

See, now he's in a pickle. I'd like to see him get out of this one.

Ok, I hate Shawn. Right off the bat. What a sick kid. But I know I'm going to love this story. I can tell.

Oiy I love I love it. I almost squealed after reading this. Perfect...end? I'm not sure if that's the end, but it does make a perfect end.

Lacy

i loved the way you described him almost like Shawn and then she wanted him to get the stud in his ear, because her boyfriend (who she couldn't remeber) had one. Love the tie in there. Great work

suffice it to say : wow!

hmm interesting, this is getting better.

Oh I wonder when she's going to remember what really happened...I think I'll go ahead and read this too even if I just did finish reading your other one...you gotta these stories are all very wonderful...

What an intro. Very well done. I like it.

AWW! =D Unbelievable, but adorable. I love it!