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dead.disco.doll 2008-06-18 . chapter 7
BEAUTIFUL
NO LONGER USING 2006-08-23 . chapter 7
aw that's a beautiful ending. extremely beautiful and I WAS RIGHT! That was her mother...yays! Great job!

Lacy
NO LONGER USING 2006-08-23 . chapter 6
aw cute end to a cute chapter
NO LONGER USING 2006-08-23 . chapter 5
okay I'm hurrying to the next chapter. Very good though
NO LONGER USING 2006-08-23 . chapter 4
Well my brain says that "Aunt" Nora must be her mother or something and those people she lives with are just posiing as her parents, which would explain the last name thing. Idk I'm just guessing.
NO LONGER USING 2006-08-23 . chapter 3
great chapter
NO LONGER USING 2006-08-23 . chapter 1
hmm...wonder what he's hiding. Nice dialogue, description, and everything.
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