I thought this was pretty good. I was kinda confused on someparts but I got it.

Oh yea! And I'm Allie's cousin. And thanks for the review. By the way, do you have any ideas for a new name for my story, A Sob Story. Thanks!

Sincerly, Happ Writer

WOAH. Very scary and amazing and omg. Just wow. The imagery was great. I love the line "Lies, I taste them" Well I actually love like every line but oh well. Really great. Bravo.

Excellent, I absolutley loved the lines: Of love and devotionUnending emotion

Those lines caught my eye, Keep it Up!

I like the flow of your poem, so subtle. The imagery was beautiful, I can almost imagine the pure girl clad in blue twirling. Somehow enigmatic, I could sense a secret behind the ladies in brown and blue. Excellent job.

Trinity

Yay alliteration! You don't see too much of that these days. This poem just makes me happy inside, not sure why. I like the image of a woman in blue dancing. Bad brown lady, Bad! Sit girl!- lol.