|Reviews for Betrayel|
| Alice Without A Wonderland 12/9/05 . chapter 1
I thought this was pretty good. I was kinda confused on someparts but I got it.
Oh yea! And I'm Allie's cousin. And thanks for the review. By the way, do you have any ideas for a new name for my story, A Sob Story. Thanks!
Sincerly, Happ Writer
| The Fourth Fate 12/9/05 . chapter 1
WOAH. Very scary and amazing and omg. Just wow. The imagery was great. I love the line "Lies, I taste them" Well I actually love like every line but oh well. Really great. Bravo.
| Random-Idiocity 12/8/05 . chapter 1
Excellent, I absolutley loved the lines: Of love and devotionUnending emotion
Those lines caught my eye, Keep it Up!
| les petits bateaux 12/8/05 . chapter 1
I like the flow of your poem, so subtle. The imagery was beautiful, I can almost imagine the pure girl clad in blue twirling. Somehow enigmatic, I could sense a secret behind the ladies in brown and blue. Excellent job.
| BlackDreamLily 12/8/05 . chapter 1
Yay alliteration! You don't see too much of that these days. This poem just makes me happy inside, not sure why. I like the image of a woman in blue dancing. Bad brown lady, Bad! Sit girl!- lol.